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I can't describe you in any form,
But you're the sun that waits for a single moment
To shimmer down the warmth that I need.
You're the fiery flares that peel off the sun
And brighten up the darkness that I have traveled through.
You're the rippling ocean on a tranquil night,
The cyan tides that wrap around me instead of drowning me.
You're even the depth of the ocean
That I wish to adventure downward and discover what you hold.
You're fire and water interlaced with each other…
And yet have a mellifluous personality that shines enough that can give sight to the blind…
I can't describe you in any form,
But you're the tranquility I oh so desperately need,
And the light that can help me exit the darkness.
:sun:  The Elements: Water 
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GlassHalfAssed Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Enjoyed the poem.  I don't know why but I found the line about "You're even the depth of the ocean" to be slightly jarring when reading. I liked the imagery!
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sandracaskey Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much! ^^;

That's my favorite line throughout the poem!
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VictorSeven Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Nice words you have there! ;)
Congratulations ^^
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sandracaskey Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :aww:
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